How do you behave when you or your team loses? Are you a sore loser or a good sport?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think a sport is just a game.
When I was young, I didn\'t get results and felt sore. And sometimes I screamed or swore.
But not now. It is right to say that I\'m getting mature. But it is more right to say that I don\'t have energy to feel angry.
Sport game is good to feel excited, not to feel angry.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ian!
I really appreciate you doing your homework. You are getting better at writing in English. I just made some minor corrections on how you can express your sentence in a different way.
-T. Caitlyn
I think a sport is just a game.
>> CORRECT
When I was young, I didn\'t get results and felt sore. And sometimes I screamed or swore.
When I was young, I didn\'t get results and felt sore. And sometimes I screamed or swore.
>> When I was young, if I didn\'t get the result that I want, I felt like a sore loser and would sometimes scream and swore.
But not now.
But not now.
>> But not anymore.
It is right to say that I\'m getting mature. But it is more right to say that I don\'t have energy to feel angry.
>> I can say that I already matured but it is better to say that I just don\'t have the energy to feel angry.
Sport game is good to feel excited, not to feel angry.
Sport game is good to feel excited, not to feel angry.
>> A sports game is good to feel excited, not angry.
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