How do you catch one\'s attention in business?
학생이 쓴 원문
I consider that everyone has a lot of good idea. But Just few persons can do it.
I believe that execution skill is most important for a business.
So When I meet an investor, I\'m just trying to show my passion and execution to them.
That\'s it. This is what I can do well. See you soon.
강사 첨삭
Hello Benjamin!
Finally, I was able to read and suggest for some organization improvements. Well, it is true that many have ideas and even brilliant ones. But then, only a few are gifted to execute their thoughts. Anyway, I am sure that you will be able to execute the project funded by your investor. Good luck!
Thank you for this answer. See you again next week!
-T. Donna =)
>> I consider that everyone has a lot of good ideas but just a few persons can do it.
I believe that execution skill is most important for a business.
I believe that execution skill is most important for a business.
>> I believe that executing skills is the most important for a business.
So When I meet an investor, I\'m just trying to show my passion and execution to them.
So When I meet an investor, I\'m just trying to show my passion and execution to them.
>> Correct!
Or: So when I meet an investor, I\'m just trying to show my passion and execution to them.
That\'s it. This is what I can do well. See you soon.
>> Correct!
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