How do you celebrate New Year\'s day?
학생이 쓴 원문
There aren\'t any special ways for me to celebrate New Year\'s day but I usually clean up my home and wash my body well.
That makes me feel refreshed and helps me start New Year with a clean mind and body.
Also, Koreans traditionally eat Tteokguk which is made of rice cakes and dumplings on New Year\'s day but I couldn\'t eat it this year.
Instead my boyfriend made me dumplings so I had them to celebrate New Year\'s day this time.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. Happy New Year! I have to say, Wow! This is one of your best and well-done compositions so far. What an amazing way to start the new year. Thank you for this and I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep them coming! I\'ll talk to you soon. ~teacher Jane \\m/
There aren\'t any special ways for me to celebrate New Year\'s day but I usually clean up my home and wash my body well.
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That makes me feel refreshed and helps me start New Year with a clean mind and body.
>>> CORRECT =)
Also, Koreans traditionally eat Tteokguk which is made of rice cakes and dumplings on New Year\'s day but I couldn\'t eat it this year.
>>> CORRECT =)
Instead my boyfriend made me dumplings so I had them to celebrate New Year\'s day this time.
>>> Instead, my boyfriend made me dumplings so I had them to celebrate New Year\'s day this time.
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