How do you celebrate New year\'s eve?
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Normally in Korea, every regulate broadcasting system will televise an award shows for each fields like drama, entertainment, and music.
Also, during the awards, there will be a countdown for starting the next year.
So I think I will be watching that with my husband.
Praying for the next year\'s wishes and sharing each other would be fun, too.
Because I would like to know what my husband would pray for it.
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Also, during the awards, there will be a countdown for starting the next year.
So I think I will be watching that with my husband.
Praying for the next year\'s wishes and sharing each other would be fun, too.
Normally in Korea, every regulate broadcasting system will televise an award shows for each fields like drama, entertainment, and music.
>>CORRECT
Also, during the awards, there will be a countdown for starting the next year.
>>CORRECT
So I think I will be watching that with my husband.
>> CORRECT
Praying for the next year\'s wishes and sharing each other would be fun, too.
>> Praying for the next year\'s wishes and sharing each other would be fun too because I would like to know what my husband is wishing for.
Because I would like to know what my husband would pray for it.
>> CONNECT THIS WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
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