How do you celebrate Seollal with your family?
학생이 쓴 원문
One day, we make food like pencake at Seollal. For example there are fish, mushrooms, and tofu pancakes etc.
we performing ancestral rites next day. and We go to Maternal grandmother’s house a day.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Julia^^
Thank you for sharing.
It seems like you spend most of your holiday with your family.
That\'s great!
_T. SHAY^^
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One day, we make food like pencake at Seollal.
>>On the first day of Seollal, we make food like pancake.
For example there are fish, mushrooms, and tofu pancakes etc.
Thank you for sharing.
It seems like you spend most of your holiday with your family.
That\'s great!
_T. SHAY^^
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One day, we make food like pencake at Seollal.
>>On the first day of Seollal, we make food like pancake.
For example there are fish, mushrooms, and tofu pancakes etc.
>>There are other food like fish, mushrooms, tofu pancakes, etc.
we performing ancestral rites next day.
we performing ancestral rites next day.
>>We perform the ancestral rites the next day.
and We go to Maternal grandmother’s house a day.
>>And we go to my maternal grandmother\'s house the day after.
>>And we go to my maternal grandmother\'s house the day after.
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