How do you communicate with your distant family members?
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I live in home with my family, and my cousin's lives in around me.
if i go out my home. i call my family on my phone, send the message,
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I live in home with my family, and my cousin\'s lives in around me.
>>> I live with my family, and my cousins live nearby.
if i go out my home. i call my family on my phone, send the message,
>>> If I go out of the house, I call or send a message to my family.
>>> OR: I call or send a message to my family whenever I go out.
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