How do you commute to your school or your place of work?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have commuted to learn the basic course of travel writer from famous writer in hobby.
so as if traveling, I go to seoul once a weekend. I have participate hard what want to do it a long time ago.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! I\'m happy to her you\'re now able to achieve your goals. See you! ~T. Elisha
I have commuted to learn the basic course of travel writer from famous writer in hobby.
>> I have commuted to learn the basic course of travelling from a famous writer as a hobby.
so as if traveling, I go to seoul once a weekend.
>> As for travelling, I go to Seoul once on a weekend.
I have participate hard what want to do it a long time ago.
>> I have been working hard to achieve what I\'ve wanted to do since a long time ago.
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