How do you conserve energy?
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Actually, I don\'t have many ways to conserve the energy. But I always turn off the light when I go to outside and turn off the TV when go to kitchen to eat some food. Also, I always separate the pet and its rabel and collect some trashes separately.
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- T. Julia
Actually, I don\'t have many ways to conserve the energy.
>> Correct
But I always turn off the light when I go to outside and turn off the TV when go to kitchen to eat some food.
>> But I always turn off the lights when I go outside, and I turn off the TV when I go to the kitchen to eat some food.
Also, I always separate the pet and its rabel and collect some trashes separately.
>>Also, I always separate the pet and its rubble, and I collect some trash separately.
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