How do you contribute to make the environment clean?

2019-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was a teenager, I could see a lot of trash on the road that thrown away from the people. People didn\'t think they had to keep clean our country because there were few things that pollute or destroy our environment. However, we are living under the uncleaned earth. Air pollution and global warming are really serious problem we have to solve. Fine dust is the most serious issue our country encountered. There are things that we can conduct to keep our environment. First of all, we should use public transportation rather than using a personal car. Second, reduce the trash and recycle it, if it is possible. Lastly, refuse to use single-use items. I have watched documentary about sea creatures that ate straw human thrown away in the sea. It takes years to discompose. It means that it is possible to eat for people polluted food. All kind of environment pollution effect on our life. There is no wonder why we must put all the effort for keeping our nations.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for sharing your answers [이름]! This is one of the big world problems.

Governments shouldn\'t be the one to make an effort but the people themselves

should start doing good deeds.

~~May~~

When I was a teenager, I could see a lot of trash on the road that thrown away from the people.

>> When I was a teenager, I could see a lot of trash on the road being thrown away by people.

People didn\'t think they had to keep clean our country because there were few things that pollute or destroy our environment.

>> People weren\'t aware that hey had to keep our country clean because there were few things that pollute or destroy our environment.

However, we are living under the uncleaned earth.

Air pollution and global warming are really serious problem we have to solve.

>> CORRECT

Fine dust is the most serious issue our country encountered.

>> Fine dust is the most serious issue our country has encountered.

There are things that we can conduct to keep our environment.

>>There are things that we can do to keep our environment clean.

First of all, we should use public transportation rather than using a personal car.

>> First, we should use public transportation rather than using a personal car.

Second, reduce the trash and recycle it, if it is possible.

>> CORRECT

Lastly, refuse to use single-use items.

>> Lastly, refrain from using single-used items.

I have watched documentary about sea creatures that ate straw human thrown away in the sea.

>> I watched a documentary about sea creatures that ate plastic straw in the sea.

It takes years to discompose.

>> It takes years to decompose.

It means that it is possible to eat for people polluted food.

>> It means that it is possible for people to contaminated food.

All kind of environment pollution effect on our life.

>> All kinds of environment pollution affect our lives.

There is no wonder why we must put all the effort for keeping our nations.

>> No wonder why we must put all effort for keeping our nations.

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