How do you contribute to make the environment clean?

2019-08-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

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The speculation and investment is little bit similar word. But that words are different. Investment have a three meaning that sale, gain and possession. But speculation have a two meaning that sale and gain. So people of speculation didn\'t living their house, they want to get a rent or extra money that difference of buy and sell. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- First, Korean have to separate the gar[이름]e to protect our environment. It have to separate paper, plastic, steel and food waste so I do the separating the gar[이름]e. And I do not separate the gar[이름]e, I have to pay the penalty to government. Second, I don\'t throw gar[이름]e away. Just keep and carry the waste from street to home. Last, I always carry my own tumbler for drinking the water. I use the tumbler when I go to the cafe. And Korean cafe have to cut the prices of coffee when buyer use the their own tumbler.

강사 첨삭

Happy holiday Simon! Thank you for these information about marketing and stock market. I have learned a lot from you. Thank you. :) Until the next one! :)

~Teacher Sheila


The speculation and investment is little bit similar word.
>>Speculation and investment are a bit similar.

But that words are different.
>>But those words are still different.

Investment have a three meaning that sale, gain and possession.
>>Investment is similar to sale, gain, and possession.

But speculation have a two meaning that sale and gain.
>>But speculator is similar to sale and gain only.

So people of speculation didn\'t living their house, they want to get a rent or extra money that difference of buy and sell.
>>Speculators don\'t own a house. They want to rent and get extra income from buying and selling.

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First, Korean have to separate the gar[이름]e to protect our environment.
>>First, Koreans have to separate the gar[이름]e to protect our environment.

It have to separate paper, plastic, steel and food waste so I do the separating the gar[이름]e.
>>It has to separate paper, plastic, steel and food waste so I usually separate the gar[이름]e.
OR>>The gar[이름]e like paper, plastic, steel and food waste should be separated. I usually separate the gar[이름]e.

And I do not separate the gar[이름]e, I have to pay the penalty to government.
>>If I do not separate the gar[이름]e, I have to pay a penalty to the government.

Second, I don\'t throw gar[이름]e away.
>>CORRECT

Just keep and carry the waste from street to home.
>>Just keep and bring the waste from the street to our home.

Last, I always carry my own tumbler for drinking the water.
>>Last, I always carry my own tumbler for drinking water.
OR>>Last, I always bring my own tumbler for drinking water.

I use the tumbler when I go to the cafe.
>>I used tumbler when I go to a cafe.

And Korean cafe have to cut the prices of coffee when buyer use the their own tumbler.
>>And Korean cafes will give discounts for coffee when buyers use their own tumblers.
OR>>And Korean cafeterias can give discounts for coffee when a buyer uses his/hre own tumbler.

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