How do you cook favorite meal?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I like to make some food on holiday.
Do you know \'Zzapaguri\'?
A few weeks ago, korea movie took 4 kind of award from Academy movie award this year.
Movie name is \'Parasite\'.
Actor of that movie make it.
It need two kinds of noodle. One is spacy and another is china soy bean noodle.
Each noodles have to be boiled and mix them without water.and add some more hot pepper.
It ia very delicious. Korean people enjoy it.
If you want to know it\'s taste, try it.
Thanks.
강사 첨삭
1. I like to make some food on holiday.
2. Do you know \'Zzapaguri\'?
3. A few weeks ago, korea movie took 4 kind of award from Academy movie award this year.
4. Movie name is \'Parasite\'.
5. Actor of that movie make it.
6. It need two kinds of noodle.
7. One is spacy and another is china soy bean noodle.
8. Each noodles have to be boiled and mix them without water.and add some more hot pepper.
9. It ia very delicious.
10. Korean people enjoy it.
>>CORRECT
11.If you want to know it\'s taste, try it.
>>CORRECT
>>I like to make some food on the holiday.
>>Do you know \'Zzapaguri\'?
OR>>Have you heard of \'Zzapaguri\'?
>>A few weeks ago, a Korean movie took 4 kinds of award from Academy movie award this year.
>>The movie is called Parasite.
>>There\'s a scene where the actor made the food.
>>It needs two kinds of noodle.
>>One is spicy and another is china soy bean noodle.
>>Each noodle has to be boiled and mixed together without water and add some more hot pepper.
>>It is very delicious.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Koreans enjoy it.
>>CORRECT
OR>>If you are curious about how it tastes, I suggest you try it.
I like spicy food. I think it\'s delicious.
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