How do you cope up with stress?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually spend to do nothing to cope up with stress sitting on a sofa. Sometimes, I meet a friend and then the stress is released.
The chatter with friends is important to release the stress to women. Once a year, I go to trip aboard. The new environment makes me new.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! Keep on doing your homework! Great job!
Until the next one! ^_^
See you in class! :)
~Teacher Sheila
>>I usually spend my time doing nothing to cope up with stress like sitting on a sofa.
Sometimes, I meet a friend and then the stress is released.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Sometimes, I meet a friend to release the stress.
The chatter with friends is important to release the stress to women.
>>Chatting with friends is important for women to release the stress.
OR>>Chatting with friends is important in releasing the stress for women.
Once a year, I go to trip aboard.
>>Once a year, I got for a trip abroad.
The new environment makes me new.
>>CORRECT
OR>>The new environment makes me a new person.
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