How do you deal with a busy schedule? Do you usually finish everything you need to finish?
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How do you deal with a busy schedule? Do you usually finish everything you need to finish?
I usually deal with my busy schedule use phone calendar. When I was student (include university), I was remembered everything. Such as my friend asked me, “What class next time?” or “Where are we supposed to meet?” and then I answered immediately. But decrease with age, my brain memory is not good. So, if I don’t use calendar or memo, I don’t remember anything.
And I was very planned person in the past. But, these days, I become a lazy person. For example, in the past if daily homework or project was on that time finished. But now I often delayed my work or plan etc. so, I was decided don’t delayed everything. And I effort do that.
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I usually deal with my busy schedule use phone calendar.
>>> I usually deal with my busy schedule using phone calendar.
>>> OR: I usually deal with my busy schedule with the aid of the phone calendar.
When I was student (include university), I was remembered everything. Such as my friend asked me, “What class next time?” or “Where are we supposed to meet?” and then I answered immediately.
>>> When I was a student (include university), I was able to remember everything such as when my friend asked me, “What class next time?” or “Where are we supposed to meet?” and then I answered immediately.
>>> OR: When I was a student (include university), I always remembered everything such as when my friend asked me, “What class next time?” or “Where are we supposed to meet?” and then I answered immediately.
But decrease with age, my brain memory is not good.
>>> But with age, my brain memory is not as good.
So, if I don’t use calendar or memo, I don’t remember anything.
>>> correct
And I was very planned person in the past.
And I was very planned person in the past.
>>> Moreover, I used to be a person who planned a lot in the past.
But, these days, I become a lazy person.
>>> correct
For example, in the past if daily homework or project was on that time finished. But now I often delayed my work or plan etc.
>>> For example, in the past, daily homework or project was finished on time but now I often delayed my work or plan, etc.
so, I was decided don’t delayed everything. And I effort do that.
>>> As a result, I have decided not to delay everything and I make an effort to do that.
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