How do you deal with an intimidating situation/person?

2021-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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Actually I am not a person who can control my face expression and true feeling. Since my job is in kind of service field, I have to show the great attitude even though I feel not good. Whenever I meet a people making me awful, I try to keep smiling without much talking. And I will try to explain a situation in detail. I think some issues make us awkward so I should solve the problem right away. As I said, I have no choice to work with only good client. Some people are rude or impolite. On the otherhands, I have met good people a lot. So Service field has a big pros and cons. I wish I become more flexible person myself to handle all people.

강사 첨삭

I think you are really moving in a big world, [이름]! But I like that part when you have mentioned about your smiling face even if you are no longer feeling good, that\'s self-control! Stay beautiful inside and out!-Faith-
Actually I am not a person who can control my face expression and true feeling. 
>> Actually, I am not a person who can control my face expressions and true feelings. 
Since my job is in kind of service field, I have to show the great attitude even though I feel not good. 
>> Since my job is in the service field, I have to show my great attitude even though I feel not good. 
Whenever I meet a people making me awful, I try to keep smiling without much talking. And I will try to explain a situation in detail. 
>> Whenever I meet people who make me awful, I try to keep smiling without much talking and I will try to explain a situation in detail. 
I think some issues make us awkward so I should solve the problem right away. 
>> CORRECT
As I said, I have no choice to work with only good client. 
>> As I\'ve said, I have no choice to work with only good clients. 
Some people are rude or impolite. 
>> CORRECT
OR I encounter discourteous people.
On the otherhands, I have met good people a lot. 
>> On the other hand, I have met a lot of good people. 
So Service field has a big pros and cons.
>> So service field has big pros and cons.  
I wish I become more flexible person myself to handle all people.
>> I wish I could become a more flexible person myself to handle all people.

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