How do you deal with boredom?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
These days, I am boring because of Covid19. I can\'t go out. So I make a prastic model. Do you know it?
When I assemble it, I can forget boredom. When I focus it, I don\'t know how fast go the time.
How about you?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]
Let me check your composition. I hope you had a good day today ^^
Dear [Name],
These days, I am boring because of Covid19. I can\'t go out. So I make a prastic model. Do you know it?
>> These days, I am bored because of Covid19. I can\'t go out so I make a plastic model. Do you know it?
When I assemble it, I can foget boredom. When I focus it, I don\'t know how fast go the time.
>> When I assemble it, I can forget my boredom but when I focus or concentrate on doing this plastic model, time was really fast.
How about you?
>> CORRECT
These days, I am boring because of Covid19. I can\'t go out. So I make a prastic model. Do you know it?
>> These days, I am bored because of Covid19. I can\'t go out so I make a plastic model. Do you know it?
When I assemble it, I can foget boredom. When I focus it, I don\'t know how fast go the time.
>> When I assemble it, I can forget my boredom but when I focus or concentrate on doing this plastic model, time was really fast.
How about you?
>> CORRECT
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