How do you deal with negative feedback?
학생이 쓴 원문
To be honest, I am afraid of negative feedback. I don\'t want to mistakes in front of people. It is my one of the obstacles is that to overcome negative emotions by myself. It is a very hard process. I can imagine when I got some negative feedback from people, I will obviously feel bad. However, I can learn how to control my emotions through them by myself. Hence, I often need to check my inner what I need or what should I do here and now. And then, I will think about people\'s intentions whether good or not. I might think about what is an important value of mine through these times. this process is that spiritually and mentally helps me. Above all, I will try to focus on the Holy Spirit. I believe that when I am weak, the Holy Spirit makes me strong. When I\'m having a hard time, I ask the Holy Spirit why me? I really want to know the reason. Over time, I realize that the truth is God always loves me and helps me and protect me is far more important rather than that question. Thanks!! :)
강사 첨삭
That\'s real, Jane! We are enlightened when God shows as the reason of our course. However, we cannot always get it, so we just have to keep trusting Him.-Faith-
To be honest, I am afraid of negative feedback. >> CORRECT
OR Sincerely, I am afraid of negative criticism.
I don\'t want to mistakes in front of people.
>> I do not want to make mistakes in front of people.
It is my one of the obstacles is that to overcome negative emotions by myself.
>> It is one of the obstacles to overcome negative emotions by myself.
It is a very hard process.
>> CORRECT
I can imagine when I got some negative feedback from people, I will obviously feel bad.
>> I could imagine when I got some negative feedback from people, I would obviously feel bad.
However, I can learn how to control my emotions through them by myself.
>> CORRECT
Hence, I often need to check my inner what I need or what should I do here and now.
>> Hence, I often need to check my inner self about what I need or what I should do here and now.
And then, I will think about people\'s intentions whether good or not.
>> Also, I will think about people\'s intentions whether good or not.
I might think about what is an important value of mine through these times.
>> CORRECT
this process is that spiritually and mentally helps me.
>> CORRECT
OR This process helps me spiritually and mentally.
Above all, I will try to focus on the Holy Spirit.
>> CORRECT
I believe that when I am weak, the Holy Spirit makes me strong.
>> CORRECT
When I\'m having a hard time, I ask the Holy Spirit why me?
>> When I am having a hard time, I ask the Holy Spirit why He chose me.
I really want to know the reason.
>> CORRECT
OR I really need Him to reveal the reason to me.
Over time, I realize that the truth is God always loves me and helps me and protect me is far more important rather than that question.
Over time, I realized that the truth is God\'s love, help, and protection is far more important than that question.
Thanks!! :)
>> Thanks! :)
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