How do you deal with stress?

2022-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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I know some good ways to relieve my stress. The first way is eating very spicy foods like a ttokppokki or chicken feet. Because when we eat that foods, we can be tearing and sweating. We may fly away the stress with the tears and sweats. And it’s a good way to run outdoors to go away the stress. Fresh air can help you ease your stress. Finally some people who are a big fan of alcohol, they used to drink with their friends to relieve stress. In my case, If I get a lot of stress from relationships, I like to drink with my friends after work. My friends are good listeners, and me too. So by talking about the troubles I faced, I can get peaceful mind again.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

I know some good ways to relieve my stress. 
>> CORRECT!
The first way is eating very spicy foods like a ttokppokki or chicken feet. 
>> CORRECT!
Because when we eat that foods, we can be tearing and sweating. 
>> That\'s because when we eat those food, we can be tearing up and sweating. 
We may fly away the stress with the tears and sweats.
>> We may let the stress fly away with the tears and sweat.
And it’s a good way to run outdoors to go away the stress. 
>> And it’s a good way to run outdoors to let  the stress go away.
Fresh air can help you ease your stress.
>> CORRECT!
Finally some people who are a big fan of alcohol, they used to drink with their friends to relieve stress. 
>> CORRECT!
In my case, If I get a lot of stress from relationships, I like to drink with my friends after work.
>> In my case, if I get a lot of stress from relationships, I like to drink with my friends after work.
My friends are good listeners, and me too. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> My friends and I are good listeners.
So by talking about the troubles I faced, I can get peaceful mind again.
>> CORRECT!

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