How do you deal with your angry?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I listen music as like a ballad and I try to forget it. but frankly, I couldn\'t stand it.
3 years ago, I could not sleep for 2 or 3 weeks, so I read something of internet site for all night.
I found a store which someone want to sell urgently. the store was very cheap. so I bought it as a half price.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I already fixed your compostion. See you around ^^
How do you deal with your anger?
I listen music as like a ballad and I try to forget it. but frankly, I couldn\'t stand it.
3 years ago, I could not sleep for 2 or 3 weeks, so I read something of internet site for all night.
I found a store which someone want to sell urgently. the store was very cheap. so I bought it as a half price.
I listen music as like a ballad and I try to forget it. but frankly, I couldn\'t stand it.
>> I listen to music like ballad songs and I try to forget my anger but frankly, I couldn\'t stand it.
3 years ago, I could not sleep for 2 or 3 weeks, so I read something of internet site for all night.
>> 3 years ago, I could not sleep for 2 or 3 weeks so I read something on the internet all night.
I found a store which someone want to sell urgently. the store was very cheap. so I bought it as a half price.
>> I found a store which sell things urgently. The store items were very cheap so I bought it as a half price.
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