How do you decide on menu to cook for your son\'s meal?

2020-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Recently, my son have been a alergy since he had an egg white a month ago. ㅜㅜ And, when he had other particular food he used to have an alergy too. So I need to be very careful about my son\'s food. I ususllay use a zucchini, potato, onion, carrot, and beef and so so. I used to cook stir-fried or soup using those. Especially, my son is now past 1st birthday. So it can\'t use salt, sugar like a source. When I taste my cook, actually it was no taste. But my son strangely like my food. So, I used to cook this material except for a particular food like an egg white.

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Recently, my son have been a alergy since he had an egg white a month ago. ㅜㅜ

>>> Recently, my son has had an allergy since he had an egg white a month ago.

And, when he had other particular food he used to have an alergy too.

>>> And, when he had other particular food he used to have an allergy too.

So I need to be very careful about my son\'s food.

>>> correct
I ususllay use a zucchini, potato, onion, carrot, and beef and so so.

>>> I usually use a zucchini, potato, onion, carrot, beef and so on.

I used to cook stir-fried or soup using those.

>>> correct
Especially, my son is now past 1st birthday.

>>> Especially, my son has now past his 1st birthday.

So it can\'t use salt, sugar like a source.

>>> I can\'t use salt or sugar for flavoring.
When I taste my cook, actually it was no taste. But my son strangely like my food.

>>> When I taste what I cook, it is actually bland. But surprisingly, my sons likes it.
So, I used to cook this material except for a particular food like an egg white.

>>> So, I used to cook this ingredient except for a particular food like an egg white.

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