How do you decide on your travel destinations?
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Recently , decide based on budget. so earn less money only go to low cost country . Later, when I earn a lot of money, I will go on a travel to Europe.
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Hey Kyle! Thank you for sharing your ideas on traveling. I\'m glad you were able to share a longer answer this time. Keep it up!^^
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Recently , decide based on budget. Later,
>>Recently, I decided based on my budget.
so earn less money only go to low cost country .
>>Since I earn less money, I will only travel to low-cost countries.
when I earn a lot of money, I will go on a travel to Europe.
>>Later, when I earn more money, I will travel to Europe.
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