How do you decide on your travel destinations?
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I consider something when I should decide on travel site.
Primary factor is a distance. beacuse I don\'t like to go far. I feel stuffy when I take a plane.
Second factor is budget. it\'s also important.
Third one is new places. I always want to go to new places. so, I give plus point to new places.
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
I consider something when I should decide on travel site.
>> I consider a few factors when deciding on a travel destination.
Primary factor is a distance. beacuse I don\'t like to go far. I feel stuffy when I take a plane.
>> The primary factor is distance because I don\'t like to travel far; I feel uncomfortable when flying.
Second factor is budget. it\'s also important.
>> The second factor is budget, which is also important.
Third one is new places. I always want to go to new places. so, I give plus point to new places.
>> The third factor is whether the place is new to me. I always want to explore new destinations, so I give extra consideration to those.
>> I consider a few factors when deciding on a travel destination.
Primary factor is a distance. beacuse I don\'t like to go far. I feel stuffy when I take a plane.
>> The primary factor is distance because I don\'t like to travel far; I feel uncomfortable when flying.
Second factor is budget. it\'s also important.
>> The second factor is budget, which is also important.
Third one is new places. I always want to go to new places. so, I give plus point to new places.
>> The third factor is whether the place is new to me. I always want to explore new destinations, so I give extra consideration to those.
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