How do you define possibilities in your life?

2024-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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Sometimes my homework title very hard to write. I can\'t define possibities in my life. I have lived many time. When I was young, I wanted a lot of things. I wanted to have many money, my sons into good University, good house and good car. Now l always want family healthy and ordinary days. I want enjoying my time to do I wanted.

강사 첨삭

Hello Eva,

You did really well with your homework! I can see that you put a lot of thought into it, and your answers are great. You’ve shared some really valuable thoughts about what’s important to you now in life, like family and health. That’s something many people come to realize as they grow older, so it’s wonderful that you already understand that. I’m sure you can continue answering these kinds of questions easily because you have such good ideas and insights. Keep it up! You’re doing a great job, and I’m really proud of your progress.

~Teacher Cathy

 

Sometimes my homework title very hard to write.

>>Sometimes, the title of my homework is very hard to write.

I can\'t define possibities in my life.

>>I can’t define the possibilities in my life.

I have lived many time.

>>I have lived for a long time.

When I was young, I wanted a lot of things.

>>CORRECT

OR>>When I was young, I wanted to have many things.

I wanted to have many money, my sons into good University, good house and good car.

>>I wanted to have a lot of money, send my sons to a good university, and have a good house and car.

Now l always want family healthy and ordinary days.

>>Now, I only want my family to be healthy and for us to live ordinary days.

I want enjoying my time to do I wanted.

>>I want to enjoy my time doing what I want.

 

 

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