How do you describe a perfect weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
For me, the perfect weekend would be the mix of something peaceful and active.
Because weekend has 2 days, I prefer that first day would be very fun and do a lot of activities. And I like that second day is relaxing and quiet. I think the perfect weekend what I think is not easy to be for every weekend. But, I can definitely make similar type of that weekend.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thanks once again for this. That kind of weekend sounds great!
-T. Beth
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For me, the perfect weekend would be the mix of something peaceful and active.>>> correct
>>> OR: For me, the perfect weekend would be a combination of something peaceful and active.
Because weekend has 2 days, I prefer that first day would be very fun and do a lot of activities.
>>> Because the weekend has 2 days, I prefer the first day to be very fun and doing a lot of activities.
And I like that second day is relaxing and quiet.
>>> And I like that second day to be relaxing and quiet.
I think the perfect weekend what I think is not easy to be for every weekend.
>>> I think the perfect weekend that I think is not easy to do every weekend.
But, I can definitely make similar type of that weekend.
>>> correct
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