How do you describe a perfect weekend?

2021-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I think a perfect weekend can be made by nice weather and people. These two things help my weekend being wonderful. I want to explain the weather first. I have a specific condition that I prefer to spend my weekend. A warm atmosphere at 2 or 3 p.m. on Sunday is exactly what I really like. If I open windows and the wind is through me, it would be great. Second, ‘meet who’ is also important. When I hang out with people on my weekend, there are some people who make me exhausted after spent time with them. I don’t want to join those meetings. For this, spending time with fine people gives me a good energy but, I’m really tired in an opposite situation. Therefore, I can describe a perfect weekend is having a gorgeous weather which I already explained and meeting people who I like and nice.

강사 첨삭

Thank you once again for this [이름]. Keep them coming! :D

I think a perfect weekend can be made by nice weather and people. 
>>> correct   
These two things help my weekend being wonderful.
>>> OR: These two things help my weekend be wonderful.  
I want to explain the weather first. 
>>> correct  
I have a specific condition that I prefer to spend my weekend. 
>>> correct  
A warm atmosphere at 2 or 3 p.m. on Sunday is exactly what I really like. 
>>> correct  
If I open windows and the wind is through me, it would be great.
>>> OR: If I open windows and the wind blows through me, it would be great.  
Second, ‘meet who’ is also important. 
>>> OR: Second, who I meet is also important.  
When I hang out with people on my weekend, there are some people who make me exhausted after spent time with them. 
>>>  ORWhen I hang out with people on my weekend, there are some people who make me exhausted after spending time with them.  
I don’t want to join those meetings. 
>>> correct  
For this, spending time with fine people gives me a good energy but, I’m really tired in an opposite situation.
>>> correct  
Therefore, I can describe a perfect weekend is having a gorgeous weather which I already explained and meeting people who I like and nice.
>>> OR: Therefore, I can describe a perfect weekend as having a gorgeous weather which I already explained and meeting people who I like and are nice.   

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