How do you describe a perfect weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think a perfect weekend can be made by nice weather and people. These two things help my weekend being wonderful.
I want to explain the weather first. I have a specific condition that I prefer to spend my weekend. A warm atmosphere at 2 or 3 p.m. on Sunday is exactly what I really like. If I open windows and the wind is through me, it would be great.
Second, ‘meet who’ is also important. When I hang out with people on my weekend, there are some people who make me exhausted after spent time with them. I don’t want to join those meetings. For this, spending time with fine people gives me a good energy but, I’m really tired in an opposite situation.
Therefore, I can describe a perfect weekend is having a gorgeous weather which I already explained and meeting people who I like and nice.
강사 첨삭
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These two things help my weekend being wonderful.
>>> OR: These two things help my weekend be wonderful.
I want to explain the weather first.
>>> correct
I have a specific condition that I prefer to spend my weekend.
>>> correct
A warm atmosphere at 2 or 3 p.m. on Sunday is exactly what I really like.
>>> correct
If I open windows and the wind is through me, it would be great.
>>> OR: If I open windows and the wind blows through me, it would be great.
Second, ‘meet who’ is also important.
>>> OR: Second, who I meet is also important.
When I hang out with people on my weekend, there are some people who make me exhausted after spent time with them.
>>> OR: When I hang out with people on my weekend, there are some people who make me exhausted after spending time with them.
I don’t want to join those meetings.
>>> correct
For this, spending time with fine people gives me a good energy but, I’m really tired in an opposite situation.
>>> correct
Therefore, I can describe a perfect weekend is having a gorgeous weather which I already explained and meeting people who I like and nice.
Therefore, I can describe a perfect weekend is having a gorgeous weather which I already explained and meeting people who I like and nice.
>>> OR: Therefore, I can describe a perfect weekend as having a gorgeous weather which I already explained and meeting people who I like and are nice.
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