How do you discern right from wrong?

2014-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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There are many ways to discern right from wrong when we make our living. First, I am able to ponder upon whether it is allowed by laws or not. If it is prohibited in a certain law, there is much possibility that it is wrong. Drunken driving, human trafficking are the examples of wrong behavior which are illegal. However it is not a absolute rule which doesn't permit any exception. There might be a right behavior which is not allowed in a law. For example, sometimes abortion could be a right solution for a woman in trouble even if it is banned in criminal law. Next, I would like to think about the background, motive and result of the behavior which is in question of right or wrong. In fact, I try to be objective to discern right from wrong because my decision might be another wrong judgement if it is not based on agreed values like basic human rights. Finally I must admit that there is no absolutely right guideline in this matter because we are vulnerable to errors.

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How is your day going so far [이름]? \"Welcome back on board!\" Discerning right from wrong is really context-based. We can never rule out the fact that there are many factors that need to be considered before claiming something as right. But as I have mentioned earlier, there\'s no clear-cut distinction between right and wrong or there\'s no such thing as good or bad - it is a matter of perspective. As for this particular example that you pointed out, human trafficking sure is a crime and is marked as \"WRONG\"/\"BAD\". But the mere fact that it is labeled as such, why do many people still do it? Do they interpret this sign differently? What if for them, it is the only RIGHT thing to do to meet their aims? The logic here can be similar with that of abortion. Come to think of it, laws are created based on what have already been done and other people don\'t deem as proper. Just like \"cyber crime\"; it sure is one of the newest trends, and to relatively stop it, our legislators came up with Cyber Crime Law. The so-called first perpetrators of this \"crime\" mustn\'t have realized that it can be wrong until it troubled others. We even have conflicting laws such as some parts of LAW OF NATURE and LAW OF MAN. \"To err is really human\" yet we have the guts to create laws for ourselves as we strive for \"ORDER\" that somehow even make our lives more chaotic. If we are going to analyze our laws deeply, we will see many loopholes, which is really problematic. *As can be observed, MAN just tries to reach for the skies, as he tries to overcome his limitations to the point of breaking natural laws. HE then comes up with artificial ones to cover up for his crime. This is going to be another story that needs much thinking and I can never do it by myself. Help me out [이름]! Maybe I am heading the \"wrong\" track. Let\'s enjoy the rest of the afternoon. Oh, it\'s time for me to bounce. I will just catch you again tomorrow. Keep safe! _Klein There are many ways to discern right from wrong when we make our living. First, I am able to ponder upon whether it is allowed by laws or not.  If it is prohibited in a certain law, there is much possibility that it is wrong. Drunken driving, human trafficking are the examples of wrong behavior which are illegal. >>CorrectHowever it is not a absolute rule which doesn\'t permit any exception. >>However, it is not AN absolute rule which doesn\'t permit any exception. There might be a right behavior which is not allowed in a law. >>Correct OR >> There might be a right behavior, which is not allowed by law. For example, sometimes abortion could be a right solution for a woman in trouble even if it is banned in criminal law. Next, I would like to think about the background, motive and result of the behavior which is in question of right or wrong. In fact, I try to be objective to discern right from wrong because my decision might be another wrong judgement if it is not based on agreed values like basic human rights. Finally I must admit that there is no absolutely right guideline in this matter because we are vulnerable to errors. >>Correct

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