How do you distinguish which news is fake from which is so-called real?

2018-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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There are two major newspaper company in Korea, one is close to the progress party, the other one is close to the conservative party. I usually read two newspaper to distinguish which is true. We have freedom of speech and publication so, we can read various news that is written by journalists who have different opinion from the same event. That's the reason why people must compare the news from the various ways. If we didn't do it, we would have a one sided opinion. I fell like that getting freedom of speech and publication might not be possible. I have seen that our government seem like controlling news on TV and newspaper regardless which is running party. However, I have learned that mankind is continuously improving and we all together have been developing democracy. That's why I believe we will find the best law, regulation and we can define what justice is.

강사 첨삭

This is something important, Sir [이름]!

Spotting fake news can be effortless these days because of the credible sites or broadcasting companies who reaffirm for a reliable journalism. Let\'s be more aware of hoaxes spread via traditional print and broadcast news media or online social media. Your thoughts are exceptional, see you!


~Teacher Eunice


There are two major newspaper company in Korea, one is close to the progress party, the other one is close to the conservative party.
>>>
There are two major newspaper companies in Korea, one is close to the progress party, and the other one is close to the conservative party.  

I usually read two newspaper to distinguish which is true.

>>> I usually read two newspapers to distinguish which is true. 

We have freedom of speech and publication so, we can read various news that is written by journalists who have different opinion from the same event. 

>>> We have freedom of speech and publications, so we can read various news that were written by journalists who have different opinions from the same event. 

That\'s the reason why people must compare the news from the various ways. 

>>> That\'s the reason why people must compare the news in various ways. 

If we didn\'t do it, we would have a one sided opinion. 

>>> If we don\'t do it, we would have one sided opinion.  

I fell like that getting freedom of speech and publication might not be possible.

>>> I feel like getting freedom of speech and publications might not be possible.

I have seen that our government seem like controlling news on TV and newspaper regardless which is running party. 

>>> I have seen that our government seemed like controlling the news on TV and on newspapers regardless of which party is running for the election. 

However, I have learned that mankind is continuously improving and we all together have been developing democracy.
>>>
correct!

That\'s why I believe we will find the best law, regulation and we can define what justice is.

>>> That\'s why I believe that we can find the best law and regulation, so we can define what justice is.

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