How do you entertain visitors or guests who stay over at your house?

2020-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I sometimes used to invite my guests. when I was pregnancy before, I liked to cook some food such as oil-pasta, Korean style food and so on. But since I have a baby, I never cook because if I cook, someone need to take care of my son. (my honey usually come back home at 8 pm on weekday. So, I cannot wait him) But we can use a great delivery food. In Korea, it has developed a lot of various delivery food not only chicken but also gril-pork before these days of corona. So, we just can order food that we want to eat anything. I just have to prepare some dessert.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this.

- T. Beth
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I sometimes used to invite my guests.

>>> correct
when I was pregnancy before, I liked to cook some food such as oil-pasta, Korean style food and so on.

>>> When I was pregnant, I liked to cook some food such as oil-pasta, Korean style food and so on.

But since I have a baby, I never cook because if I cook, someone need to take care of my son. (my honey usually come back home at 8 pm on weekday. So, I cannot wait him)

>>> But since I have a baby, I never cook because if I cook, someone needs to take care of my son. (My honey usually comes back home at 8 pm on the weekdays. So, I cannot wait for him.)

But we can use a great delivery food.

>>> correct
In Korea, it has developed a lot of various delivery food not only chicken but also gril-pork before these days of corona.

>>> In Korea, a lot of various delivery food has been developed not only chicken but also grilled pork before these days of corona.

So, we just can order food that we want to eat anything.

>>> So, we can just order food that we want to eat.

I just have to prepare some dessert.

>>> correct

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