How do you entertain your visitors?
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you entertain your visitors?
I invite my acquaintances to my place, and I entertain my visitors to dinner.
Why do some people invite others to visit their place?
They show their lifestyle of living in their place, and promote friendship among each other.
강사 첨삭
How do you entertain your visitors?
I invite my acquaintances to my place, and I entertain my visitors to dinner.
I invite my acquaintances to my place, and I entertain my visitors to dinner.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I invite my acquaintances to my place, and I entertain my visitors while having dinner.
Why do some people invite others to visit their place?
They show their lifestyle of living in their place, and promote friendship among each other.
>>> OR: I invite my acquaintances to my place, and I entertain my visitors while having dinner.
Why do some people invite others to visit their place?
They show their lifestyle of living in their place, and promote friendship among each other.
>>> correct
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