How do you entertain your visitors?

2021-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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When my visitors come to my house, I try to cook in order to entertain. I have a lack of the skill, but I will cook hard for my visitors. I think if we have a good meal, they make a good impression for my house.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [이름]! I am happy that you answered the homework today. Just continue working hard so that you can achieve success. Keep safe and stay healthy! :)

- Teacher Sophia


When my visitors come to my house, I try to cook in order to entertain.
>> When my visitors come to my house, I try to cook for them in order to entertain them.
I have a lack of the skill, but I will cook hard for my visitors.
>> I lack the skills, but I will try hard to cook for my visitors.
I think if we have a good meal, they make a good impression for my house.
>> I think that if we serve a good meal, they can make a good impression for my house.

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