How do you explain the price to a customer who says it\'s too expensive?
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Price is important in sales. And our product is more expensive than competitors.
But, our product have good quality and design. Our product ensure longer life cycle. They actually save money in the long term. Our product is more quiet. When a customer use our product, anyone feel like comfort. Our product looks very good. These day, design is important in sales.
As conclusion, our product has more competitive.
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Hi, Jayjay!
2. But, our product have good quality and design. Our product ensure longer life cycle.
6. As conclusion, our product has more competitive.
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Here are some notes:
1. Price is important in sales. And our product is more expensive than competitors.
>>Price is important in sales, and our product is more expensive than the competitors.
2. But, our product have good quality and design. Our product ensure longer life cycle.
>>However, our product has good quality and design, and it ensures a longer life cycle.
3. They actually save money in the long term.
>>They are actually saving money in the long term.
4. Our product is more quiet. When a customer use our product, anyone feel like comfort.
>>Our product is more quiet, so when a customer uses our product, he/she could feel some comfort.
5. Our product looks very good. These day, design is important in sales.
>>Our product looks very good. These days, design is also important in sales.
6. As conclusion, our product has more competitive.
>>In conclusion, our product is more competitive.
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