How do you feel about animals despite having an allergy?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like pets at home very much.
Especially, I like dogs.
When I was young, maybe 5 or 6 years old, I had dogs in my house.
It was in middle school that I knew I was allergic to animals, dust, and peaches.
Since then, I have not raised my pets at home.
Mr. [Name], a dental technician, goes to the countryside every weekend.
There is an old house with a large yard in the countryside, but no one lives there now.
A dog there lives alone.
It was a stray dog, but Mr. [Name] is raising it.
The dog\'s name is Sundae and he is over 10 years old, but sometimes Mr. [Name] goes in two weeks.
At that time, Mr. [Name]\'s older sister who lives nearby sometimes comes to feed him.
I really enjoy talking to Mr. [Name] about Sundae.
Dogs are just as good at expressing what they like and dislike as humans.
강사 첨삭
Hello David. Your writing is detailed and engaging! I made a few adjustments for smoother phrasing and clarity while keeping your original meaning. Your descriptions make it easy to visualize the story of Sundae and Mr. [Name]. Keep up the great work!
~ T. Lia
I like pets at home very much.
>> I really like having pets at home.
Especially, I like dogs.
>> I especially like dogs.
When I was young, maybe 5 or 6 years old, I had dogs in my house.
>> When I was around 5 or 6 years old, I had dogs at home.
It was in middle school that I knew I was allergic to animals, dust, and peaches.
>> I found out I was allergic to animals, dust, and peaches when I was in middle school.
Since then, I have not raised my pets at home.
>> Since then, I have not had pets at home.
Mr. [Name], a dental technician, goes to the countryside every weekend.
>> CORRECT
There is an old house with a large yard in the countryside, but no one lives there now.
>> CORRECT
A dog there lives alone.
>> A dog lives there alone.
It was a stray dog, but Mr. [Name] is raising it.
>> It was a stray dog, but Mr. [Name] has taken care of it.
The dog\'s name is Sundae and he is over 10 years old, but sometimes Mr. [Name] goes in two weeks.
>> The dog\'s name is Sundae, and he is over 10 years old. However, sometimes Mr. [Name] can only visit every two weeks.
At that time, Mr. [Name]\'s older sister who lives nearby sometimes comes to feed him.
>> During those times, Mr. [Name]\'s older sister, who lives nearby, sometimes comes to feed him.
I really enjoy talking to Mr. [Name] about Sundae.
>> I really enjoy talking to Mr. [Name] about Sundae.
Dogs are just as good at expressing what they like and dislike as humans.
>> CORRECT
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