How do you feel about climate change?
학생이 쓴 원문
Differently the past, nowadays our climate is changing all over the world due to global warming. In arctic, polar bears have no food to eat, many places occurs earthquake, volcano, and tsunami. I really feel sad and need to preserve our planet.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your answer.
I really appreciate it.
The changes because of global warming makes me sad as well.
I hope that other people will also feel the need to preserve our planet.
~Teacher Gina
>> Differently from the past, nowadays, our climate is changing all over the world due to global warming. In the Arctic, polar bears have no food to eat. In many places, earthquakes, volcano eruptions and tsunamis occur. I really feel sad and I also feel the need to preserve our planet.
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