How do you feel about cosmetic treatments or surgeries to look younger?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m fine with cosmetic treatments of surgeries in moderation.
I think that is one of the ways of taking care of myself.
I\'m actually taking cosmetic treatments regularly for my skins, and I have plans for the future too.
But I don\'t like plastic surgeries to look younger.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, [이름] [이름]! You expressed your opinion clearly and gave personal examples, which makes your response realistic and relatable. I like that you distinguished between regular cosmetic treatments and plastic surgery, it shows thoughtful reasoning. To improve, focus on small grammar points and word choice, like skin (uncountable) and plastic surgery (not plural). Overall, your answer is honest, clear, and well-structured!
-Teacher Wela
I\'m fine with cosmetic treatments of surgeries in moderation.
>> I\'m fine with cosmetic treatments or surgeries in moderation.
I think that is one of the ways of taking care of myself.
>> I think it is one way to take care of myself.
I\'m actually taking cosmetic treatments regularly for my skins, and I have plans for the future too.
>> I actually receive cosmetic treatments regularly for my skin, and I have plans to continue in the future.
But I don\'t like plastic surgeries to look younger.
>> However, I don’t like plastic surgery just to look younger.
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