How do you feel about having extra work on the side while maintaining a full-time job?
학생이 쓴 원문
In this situation, I believe I like to have extra work because I\'m such a workaholic. I don\'t like busy days but I prefer than dull days. It makes me more energetic and productive and I can also earn more money as well. However if I don\'t do well in a full-time job, than I should focus on my job first. It\'s much more important to concentrate on the main thing.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, [이름]! That’s awesome! It sounds like you really enjoy staying busy, and it’s cool that it makes you feel more energized and productive.
~T. Jenna
In this situation, I believe I like to have extra work because I\'m such a workaholic.
Correct, or
>>In this context, I genuinely prefer to embrace additional work, as I have a tendency to be quite the workaholic
I don\'t like busy days but I prefer than dull days.
>>I don\'t like busy days, but I prefer them to dull days.
OR
>>I’m not a fan of busy days, but I definitely prefer them over dull ones.
It makes me more energetic and productive and I can also earn more money as well.
>>It makes me feel more energetic and productive, and I can also earn more money. / It makes me feel more energetic and productive, and I can earn more money as well.
OR
>> It not only boosts my energy and productivity, but it also allows me to increase my earnings.
However, if I don\'t do well in a full-time job, than I should focus on my job first.
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>>However, if I’m not performing well in a full-time job, I should prioritize that before anything else.
It\'s much more important to concentrate on the main thing.
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>>It is crucial to focus on the primary task at hand.
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