How do you feel about making choices for other people?
학생이 쓴 원문
Making choices for other people is not easy. Because it means a willingness to pay for others.
And It cause a loss or disadvantage to me. So making choices for others means that I can put up with my disadvantages.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ian! Thank you so much for taking the time to do your homework. You were able to use good expressions in your homework.
- Debbie
>> This is a good sentence.
Because it means a willingness to pay for others.
>> That is because it means willingness to do something for others.
And It cause a loss or disadvantage to me.
>> It is disadvantageous for me.
So making choices for others means that I can put up with my disadvantages.
>> Therefore, making choices for others means I should put up with the disadvantages,
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