How do you feel about making mistakes? Do you worry about it?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m timid and worried. So if I make a mistake, I\'ll be disappointed and blame myself. Recently I made mistake while working part-time, my face turned red and I was embarrassed. I reflected on my self and resolved not to make a same mistake again. I\'m trying not to repeat the same mistake so that I\'m not disappointed in myself.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Sandy!
Mistakes are somewhat inevitable in some cases.
If you will not have any mistakes, then I think you can never learn.
But it\'s good to hear that you will do better :)
Fighting!
I\'m timid and worried.
>>> CORRECT!
So if I make a mistake, I\'ll be disappointed and blame myself.
>>> CORRECT!
Recently I made mistake while working part-time, my face turned red and I was embarrassed.
>>> Recently, I made a mistake while working part-time, so my face turned red and I was embarrassed.
I reflected on my self and resolved not to make a same mistake again.
>>> I reflected and vowed not to make the same mistake again.
I\'m trying not to repeat the same mistake so that I\'m not disappointed in myself.
>>> I try not to repeat the same mistake so as not to be disappointed in myself.
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