How do you feel about making plans for yourself and about others making plans for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think making plans for people including me is helpful for a life in many ways. I am a person who prefers making plans for preparing something in advance. So I feel secure and comfortable when making plans. However, There is also a weakness in making plans. Sometimes, I have to make decisions immediately, and I\'m not good at that because I usually judge situations based on my plans.
On the other hand, some people sometimes step in my daily life by making plans for me. For example, when I have to learn something, I can get help from adviser\'s plans. By following a plan someone made for me, I can reduce trial and error. Therefore, I want to raise both skills of sticking to plans and responding to immediate situations.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
You gave a balanced view on the pros and cons of structured planning. Plans do provide comfort!
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
I think making plans for people including me is helpful for a life in many ways.
~ I think making plans for people, including myself, is helpful in life in many ways.
I am a person who prefers making plans for preparing something in advance.
~ I am a person who prefers making plans to prepare for things in advance.
So I feel secure and comfortable when making plans.
~ CORRECT.
However, There is also a weakness in making plans.
~ However, there is also a downside to relying on plans.
Sometimes, I have to make decisions immediately, and I\'m not good at that because I usually judge situations based on my plans.
~ Sometimes, I have to make immediate decisions, which I\'m not good at because I usually judge situations based on my existing plans..
On the other hand, some people sometimes step in my daily life by making plans for me.
~ On the other hand, some people sometimes step into my daily life by making plans for me.
For example, when I have to learn something, I can get help from adviser\'s plans.
~ For example, when I have to learn something, I can get help from an adviser\'s plans.
By following a plan someone made for me, I can reduce trial and error.
~ CORRECT.
Therefore, I want to raise both skills of sticking to plans and responding to immediate situations.
~ Therefore, I want to improve both skills of sticking to plans and responding to immediate situations.
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