How do you feel about spending time in your car during rush hour?

2016-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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It is painful to stay in the car during rush hour. Less than one hour-drive is okay to me. However, it usually takes me one and half hours or more when I come back home from my office due to the heavy traffic. When I drive to work in the morning, it is okay because I leave my house so early like before 6:30 so that I can avoid traffic jam. The traffic congestion in big cities is getting more serious. I feel dizzy behind the wheel when a vehicle is crawling. I had numerous cases of almost hitting the vehicle ahead. It is waste of time to be stuck in traffic. I feel exhausted and completely drained after driving such a long time at a low speed. Driving long hours at high speed is okay and less stressful than driving the same hours at low speed. I often listen to radio while commuting by car, however, I cannot enjoy it when it takes more than an hour. Another problem I often suffer from while driving at rush hours is pain in my back. To avoid all of them, I often take a subway.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Sir [이름]! Thank you so much for your time.I appreciate it that you sent a composition today. I miss reading your insights. ^^ Have a good day. Take care. See you in class. Teacher Nina   It is painful to stay in the car during rush hour. >> correct Less than one hour-drive is okay to me. >> correct However, it usually takes me one and half hours or more when I come back home from my office due to the heavy traffic. >> correct >> Better: However, it usually takes one and a half hours or more when I go home from my office by car due to the heavy traffic. When I drive to work in the morning, it is okay because I leave my house so early like before 6:30 so that I can avoid traffic jam. >> correct The traffic congestion in big cities is getting more serious. >> correct I feel dizzy behind the wheel when a vehicle is crawling. >> correct I had numerous cases of almost hitting the vehicle ahead. >> correct It is waste of time to be stuck in traffic. >> Better: It is a waste of time to be stuck in traffic. I feel exhausted and completely drained after driving such a long time at a low speed. >> correct Driving long hours at high speed is okay and less stressful than driving the same hours at low speed. >> Better: Driving long hours at high speed is okay and less stressful than driving the same hours at a low speed. I often listen to radio while commuting by car, however, I cannot enjoy it when it takes more than an hour. >> correct Another problem I often suffer from while driving at rush hours is pain in my back. >> correct >> OR: Another problem that I often suffer when driving during rush hour is my back pain. To avoid all of them, I often take a subway. >> correct >> OR: To avoid all of them, I often take the subway.

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