How do you feel about taking revenge?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it is hard to succeed to take revenge. If I succeed to take revenge, I would be afraid of another revenge that my enemy could try. It\'s just a vicious cycle. No one can feel happy in this repetitive revenges. In short, the losses overweigh the gains in revenge. In other words, It is not wise to spend a lot of time and energy to take revenge.
I don\'t think I can be happy through my revenge, because what I really want is to restore my damages made by the enemy and to return to normal.
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- Debbie
I think it is hard to succeed to take revenge.
>> I think it is hard to succeed in taking revenge.
If I succeed to take revenge, I would be afraid of another revenge that my enemy could try.
>> If I succeeded in taking revenge, I would be afraid of my enemy\'s retribution.
It\'s just a vicious cycle.
>> It would just be a vicious cycle.
No one can feel happy in this repetitive revenges.
>> No one can feel happy in this cycle.
In short, the losses overweigh the gains in revenge.
>> It is because the losses outweigh the gains in taking revenge.
In other words, It is not wise to spend a lot of time and energy to take revenge.
>> In other words, it is not wise to spend a lot of time and energy to take revenge.
I don\'t think I can be happy through my revenge, because what I really want is to restore my damages made by the enemy and to return to normal.
>> I don\'t think I could be happy taking revenge because I would only want to restore the damage made by the enemy and return to normal.
- Debbie
I think it is hard to succeed to take revenge.
>> I think it is hard to succeed in taking revenge.
If I succeed to take revenge, I would be afraid of another revenge that my enemy could try.
>> If I succeeded in taking revenge, I would be afraid of my enemy\'s retribution.
It\'s just a vicious cycle.
>> It would just be a vicious cycle.
No one can feel happy in this repetitive revenges.
>> No one can feel happy in this cycle.
In short, the losses overweigh the gains in revenge.
>> It is because the losses outweigh the gains in taking revenge.
In other words, It is not wise to spend a lot of time and energy to take revenge.
>> In other words, it is not wise to spend a lot of time and energy to take revenge.
I don\'t think I can be happy through my revenge, because what I really want is to restore my damages made by the enemy and to return to normal.
>> I don\'t think I could be happy taking revenge because I would only want to restore the damage made by the enemy and return to normal.
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