How do you feel about the result of the Olympics? If you are in the shoes of Kim Yuna, what are you

I think I would feel the same way as Yuna expressed in her interview with media. She said that the color of a medal was not important for her. She has tried hard to prepare for the Olympics and showed everything she could do without any big flaws. She went on saying that she was very happy that it was all over now. She seemed to feel relieved from the stress and the burden that was put on her shoulders. It couldn’t be better if she could clinch the gold medal, but even the silver medal is shining and valuable. Sometimes, we need to be more concerned with the process than the result. She is a still young girl. I can understand how painful it was for her as a just 25 years old young girl to overcome the sense of oppression she felt that she had to win the game. Many people focused too much on her victory only. They did not doubt that she would win the game. It must have been stress for her to get too much attention and high expectations from the people and media. Now let her relax.

Good evening Sir [이름]! Thank you for sending this in. ^^ How are you? I am so happy to receive a composition from you today. You daughter told me that you met your friends last night. I really had a great time talking to her. She is really good. I appreciate your effort in sharing your opinions about Kim Yuna\'s performance. You are right! She deserve to relax and take a break. She did her best and we should be happy for her. See you in class. Teacher Nina   I think I would feel the same way as Yuna expressed in her interview with media. >> I think I would feel the same way as Yuna expressed in her interview with the media. She said that the color of a medal was not important for her. >> She said that the color of the medal was not important for her. She has tried hard to prepare for the Olympics and showed everything she could do without any big flaws. >> Correct! She went on saying that she was very happy that it was all over now. >> She kept on saying tht she was very happy that it is over now. She seemed to feel relieved from the stress and the burden that was put on her shoulders. >> She seemed relieved from the stress and the burden that was put on her shoulders. It couldn’t be better if she could clinch the gold medal, but even the silver medal is shining and valuable. >> Did you mean: It would be better if she clinched the gold medal, even if the silver medal is shining and valuable. Sometimes, we need to be more concerned with the process than the result. >> Correct! She is a still young girl. >> She is still a young girl. >> OR: She is still young. I can understand how painful it was for her as a just 25 years old young girl to overcome the sense of oppression she felt that she had to win the game. >> I can understand how painful it was for her as a 25 years old young girl to overcome the sense of oppression that she felt to win the game. Many people focused too much on her victory only. >> Many people only focused on her victory. >> OR: A lot of people were too much focused on her victory. They did not doubt that she would win the game. >> Correct! >> OR: They were confident that she will win the game. It must have been stress for her to get too much attention and high expectations from the people and media. >> It must have been stressful for her to get too much attention and high expectations form the people and media. Now let her relax. >> Correct!