How do you feel about those tourists who visit your country? What is the best way for a country to b
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If someone visit my country, I will be happy to welcome.
>>CORRECT!
>>I will be happy if someone will visit my country.
Probably she/he don’t speak Korean, she/he will be in trouble or will have some problems.
>>Probably she/he doesn\'t speak Korean, she/he will be in trouble or will have some problems.
I’d like to help her/him.
>>CORRECT!
>>I\'d be happy to help him/her.
In Korea has lots of beautiful places to visit, surely she/he should come here.
>>Korea has lots of beautiful places to visit, surely she/he should come here.
First of all, we need to advertise and give some information to other countries to visit here.
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>>Mainly, we need to promote our country\'s information to encourage tourists.
We have famous some foods and K-pops, still, many countries don’t know Korea.
>>We have some famous foods and K-pops, still, many countries don’t know about Korea.
Many Koreans should speak English fluently, we need to make a long term and short term plans to spread out culture.
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>>We need to make a long term and short term plans to spread out our culture, furthermore Koreans should speak English fluently.
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