How do you feel about working with other people?
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Hello [이름],
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Teacher ELLY.
How do you feel about working with other people?
I don\'t prefer working with other people.
>>I don\'t like working with other people.
or>>I prefer not to work with other people.
Of course, I know that there are lots of advantages when I work with a group.
CORRECT!
or>>Certainly, I am aware that working with a group has tons of advantages.
I can easily get some useful information and also i can get many good piece of advice for them.
>>I can easily get some useful information and also numerous good pieces of advice from them.
But i want to do something om my own pace without any obstacles.
>>But I want to do something on my own pace without any obstacles.
or>>However, I want to work on my own pace without any interruptions.
But if i do something in a group i have to give up something i wanted.
>>Because if I work with a group, I have to give up something I really like doing.
or>>Because if I have to collaborate with a group, I need to forego some ideas that I would like to try.
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