How do you feel about working with other people?

2019-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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I don\'t prefer working with other people. Of course, i know that there are lots of advantages when i work with a group. I can easily get some useful information and also i can get many good piece of advice for them. But i want to do something om my own pace without any obstacles. But if i do something in a group i have to give up something i wanted.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you for your opinions!

Have a nice Thursday!

Teacher ELLY.

How do you feel about working with other people?

I don\'t prefer working with other people.

>>I don\'t like working with other people.

or>>I prefer not to work with other people.

Of course, I know that there are lots of advantages when I work with a group.

CORRECT!

or>>Certainly, I am aware that working with a group has tons of advantages.

I can easily get some useful information and also i can get many good piece of advice for them.

>>I can easily get some useful information and also numerous good pieces of advice from them.

But i want to do something om my own pace without any obstacles.

>>But I want to do something on my own pace without any obstacles.

or>>However, I want to work on my own pace without any interruptions.

But if i do something in a group i have to give up something i wanted.

>>Because if I work with a group, I have to give up something I really like doing.

or>>Because if I have to collaborate with a group, I need to forego some ideas that I would like to try.

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