*How do you feel about your English learning so far?_1

2020-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

학생이 쓴 원문

I think it’s right to say that my English learning could be divided two stages. First stage is learning English for the test such as TOEFL. As I said in our class, I had to get a good score as high as possible to apply foreign dental school, so I spent lots of my time preparing the test. Come to think of it, it was very helpful to develop my speaking English because, back then, I had difficulty to express my ideas verbally. During the preparing days, however, I’ve wanted to study more practical and interesting English rather than English for a test, which means I’ve wished to enjoy English rather than study English. Second stage is the period of tries and errors. I’ve listened a certain radio station called “Good Morning Pops” which program deals various parts of English. For example, the radio program contents include pops, movies, news, vocabularies, et cetera. I don’t know it was actually useful for my English learning but definitely it was rest for me.

강사 첨삭

Thank you Mr. [Name] for answering your homework. I hope to meet your expectations by the end of our classes. 
I will do my best to help you as much as I can. 
Keep a lookout on our next classes. I will prepare different practices for you to keep so you can do it on your free time. 
~Teacher Eve.
I think it’s right to say that my English learning could be divided two stages.
>> I think it’s right to say that my English learning could be divided into two stages.
First stage is learning English for the test such as TOEFL. 
>> Correct!
>> OR: First stage is learning English for the TOEFL test. 
As I said in our class, I had to get a good score as high as possible to apply foreign dental school, so I spent lots of my time preparing the test. 
>> As I said in our class, I had to get a good score as high as possible for me to apply to foreign dental school, so I\'m spending lots of my time preparing for the test. 
Come to think of it, it was very helpful to develop my speaking English because, back then, I had difficulty to express my ideas verbally.
>> Come to think of it, it was very helpful for me to develop my speaking English because, back then, I had difficulty expressing my ideas verbally.
During the preparing days, however, I’ve wanted to study more practical and interesting English rather than English for a test, which means I’ve wished to enjoy English rather than study English.
>> During the preparation days, however, I’ve wanted to study more practical and interesting English rather than English for a test, which means I’ve wished to enjoy English rather than study English.
Second stage is the period of tries and errors. 
>> Second stage is the period of trial and error.
I’ve listened a certain radio station called “Good Morning Pops” which program deals various parts of English. 
>> I’ve listened a certain radio station called “Good Morning Pops”, the program that deals with various parts of English.
For example, the radio program contents include pops, movies, news, vocabularies, et cetera. 
>> Correct!
I don’t know it was actually useful for my English learning but definitely it was rest for me.
>> I don’t know why but it was actually useful for my English learning but definitely it was easy for me.

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