How do you feel about your parents growing older?
학생이 쓴 원문
It so sad thing just to think about it.
All the people growing older and even my parents couldn\'t avoid the time.
My parents already older and they ready to retire.
I remember my parents\' youth. And I think they are the same al least from my eyes.
I cannot believe their age.
Time is getting fast and they getting weak.
I\'ll be their sheird just like they did.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for your answer, [이름]! ^_^ I totally agree with you. It also makes me sad to see my parents grow older as time goes by. :( I find it sweet of you to say that you will also be your parents\' shield now that you have become an adult~ You are a good daughter. ^^
~T.Harmony <3
>> It\'s sad just thinking about it.
All the people growing older and even my parents couldn\'t avoid the time.
All the people growing older and even my parents couldn\'t avoid the time.
>> Everybody\'s growing older, and my parents are no exception.
My parents already older and they ready to retire.
My parents already older and they ready to retire.
>> My parents have grown older and are ready for retirement.
I remember my parents\' youth.
I remember my parents\' youth.
>> CORRECT!
And I think they are the same al least from my eyes.
>> And I think they are still the same, at least from my point of view.
I cannot believe their age.
I cannot believe their age.
>> CORRECT!
Time is getting fast and they getting weak.
Time is getting fast and they getting weak.
>> Time is ticking fast and they are becoming weak.
I\'ll be their sheird just like they did.
I\'ll be their sheird just like they did.
>> I\'ll be their shield, just like they did for me.
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