How do you feel after a long vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Rana!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I had a long summer vacation.
>> CORRECT!
I think time went by so fast. And I hope the vacation is longer.
>> I think time went by so fast and I hoped the vacation was longer.
But I think this second semester will be more happy than the first semester so I am excited.
>> But I think this second semester will be happier than the first semester so I am excited.
I think that I grew up during this vacation.
>> CORRECT!
I will do my best in my new semester!
>> CORRECT!
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