How do you feel after exercising?
학생이 쓴 원문
My feel after exercising is great. Because I’m done what I made a plan. It makes achievement to me.
I want to go to the Gym 3 to 5days a week. If I did It feel great how amazing am I!
강사 첨삭
Hello there Mun!
Exercising truly improves our endurance and increases our capacity to do more work. Thus, it makes us happier and live better. I hope many people realize this. There is no excuse in not staying active even for just a few minutes in our lives.
Well done on your homework! Take care and see you next week!
-T. Donna =)
>> My feeling after exercising is great!
I want to go to the Gym 3 to 5days a week.
Because I’m done what I made a plan. It makes achievement to me.
>> Because I have done what I planned, it makes it an achievement to me.
I want to go to the Gym 3 to 5days a week.
>> Correct!
Or: I want to go to the gym 3 to 5 days a week.
If I did It feel great how amazing am I!
>> If I did it, I will feel great how amazing I am!
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