How do you feel after finishing all that cleaning?
학생이 쓴 원문
I haven\'t finished cleaning my room yet.
I\'m going to finish everything on the weekend.
But how would I feel when I\'m done cleaning?
There is a reason why I clean the room and reposition the furniture or order the bookshelf to put on my desk like today.
I work to change my environment if my thoughts and actions do not move in the direction of development and do not think creatively.
I thought this was the time for this work.
Of course, I\'ll feel refreshed, and I think creative ideas will come out of my head to move in a better direction.
강사 첨삭
Hi David! Your writing expresses a strong sense of self-awareness and motivation! You did a great job conveying your thoughts about how cleaning impacts your mindset. I made a few small adjustments for clarity and natural flow, but your ideas are well-structured. Keep up the great work!
~ T. Lia
I haven\'t finished cleaning my room yet.
>> CORRECT
I\'m going to finish everything on the weekend.
>> CORRECT
But how would I feel when I\'m done cleaning?
>> CORRECT
There is a reason why I clean the room and reposition the furniture or order the bookshelf to put on my desk like today.
>> There is a reason why I clean my room, reposition the furniture, and organize the bookshelf to place on my desk, like I did today.
I work to change my environment if my thoughts and actions do not move in the direction of development and do not think creatively.
>> I change my environment when my thoughts and actions do not align with growth or creativity.
I thought this was the time for this work.
>> I felt that now was the right time for this task.
Of course, I\'ll feel refreshed, and I think creative ideas will come out of my head to move in a better direction.
>> Of course, I\'ll feel refreshed, and I believe creative ideas will flow, helping me move in a better direction.
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