How do you feel and what do you do after a long vacation?

2022-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Of course, I feel lethargic and bored after a long vacation. But I will make a money for next vacation. Actually, I spend a lot of money on food during vacation. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic:)

That sound scrumptious. I bet you experience a lot of food when you travel. Keep it up!

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Of course, I feel lethargic and bored after a long vacation.

>> CORRECT

But I will make a money for next vacation.

>> But I will save some money for my next vacation because I spend a lot of it on food.

Actually, I spend a lot of money on food during vacation. :)

>>CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

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