How do you feel and what do you do after a long vacation? Explain your answer in detail.
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After a long vacation, I will feel be afraid of my school life and resolve doing my best for a year. Also, I will search and do many things since I\'m a school president for a year. I hope that for a year, I will be able to do my best because in next year, I should enter a high school. Of course, I hope that I can keep doing my best from now on. In this year, I think that I will face the problems so, I\'m very scary, but I hope that I can stand them.
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Hi Kimberly:)
I\'m sure you\'re going to do fine. Your the best school president your classmates can ever have.
After a long vacation, I will feel be afraid of my school life and resolve doing my best for a year.
>> After a long vacation, I will feel be afraid of going back to my school life and resolve it by doing my best for a year.
Also, I will search and do many things since I\'m a school president for a year.
>> Also, I will search and do many things since I\'m the school president for a year.
I hope that for a year, I will be able to do my best because in next year, I should enter a high school.
>> I hope that for a year, I will be able to do my best because next year, I should will enter high school.
Of course, I hope that I can keep doing my best from now on.
>> CORRECT
In this year, I think that I will face the problems so, I\'m very scary, but I hope that I can stand them.
>> This year, I think that I will face the problems so I\'m very scared. I hope that I can stand them.
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