How do you feel and what do you do after a long vacation? Explain your answer in detail.
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, this long vacation was really boring, and I am going to go to my school again after this vacation.
Because of COVID19, I was not able to do some special things or hanging with my friends.
Because of that, I was really boring during this long vacation, and I did some activities that I can do be myself.
And also I am going to go to my school again, and I am planing to meet new friends.
I don\'t want this kinds of long and boring vacations, and I wish that I could meet new good friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] :)
Only a few more weeks and classes would start again. I hope you will meet more wonderful friends this school year. :)
In my opinion, this long vacation was really boring, and I am going to go to my school again after this vacation.
>> In my opinion, this long vacation is really boring. I am about to go to my school again after this.
Because of COVID19, I was not able to do some special things or hanging with my friends.
>> Because of COVID-19, I was not able to do some special things or hang out with my friends.
Because of that, I was really boring during this long vacation, and I did some activities that I can do be myself.
>> That\'s why it is very boring although, I did some activities by myself.
And also I am going to go to my school again, and I am planing to meet new friends.
>> When the classes start again, I am planning to meet new friends.
I don\'t want this kinds of long and boring vacations, and I wish that I could meet new good friends.
>> I don\'t want this kind of long and boring vacation. I wish I can meet new good friends already.
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